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Post by zeymah do vulom on Sat Nov 28, 2015 10:43 pm


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Name: Zeymah Do Vulom
Alias: Zey, Zeymah, shadow beast
Age: 140
Gender: male
Species: dragon
Personality: Zeymah is one that is a kind and generous soul.  He will stop at nothing to try to help anyone and everything, that is if they don't have a contract on their head.  His kindness and patience however is not endless.  If you try to hurt any of his friends or him, it will send him into a darker version of himself called "the dark one."  The dark one is like what i said, a version  of himself that will stop at nothing until this enemy is killed, and will kill anyone or anything i it's path.  
Interests: reading, friends, and hunting for food or his target.
Dislikes: his target getting away, a person protecting the target, and someone else getting the target before him.
Fears: being found out, for that he is a assassin awaiting a contract appearing in any world.  But he fears this for that one person found out long ago, and he was almost killed for his crimes.
Elements: Darkness

General Appearance
Height: 54 ft
Eyes: Red
Appearance: Zeymah looks like alduin, except he is smaller and his scales are smother.  His scales are as black as the night and smooth as a slow-moving river, with spikes as sharp as a sharpen sword.  His weapons are his claws, tail, teeth, and his knowledge.  even though he doesn't know where he is sometimes, he can exploit these locations for if he kind of knows his surroundings. His eyes are red as a stream of blood, yet it show a calm feeling.
Skills and Abilities
Strengths: Zeymah was trained to be in the shadows of the night, hidden from view until he attacks.
Weaknesses: Even though he is powerful, he does have a limit.  For each soul casting ability he does, it takes a piece of his soul too, which will weaken him.
Special Abilities: His special powers that range from telling his foes he is somewhere else for a unexpected attack, to weaken their bond between the foes souls to the mortal world, making them weaker then before, to using rage to tear out their souls and heal Zey depending of the power of his foe, but rarely uses the last two unless he needs too.  The reason he can use these special powers is that he was trained to use them for the darkness, which they were known as "The darkest knights".  These special powers do come with a price as well for he never uses them, for that the soul riper and reaper's will weakens his own soul and will put him in a death-like slumber if used too much.  Another special ability is his shadow travel, which is a thing he created to compare him with fast-travel, but takes some energy from him for every shadow gate.

Combat Style: He uses the shadows to his advantage and sneaks upon his foes.  The only time he reveals himself is to attack or to show that he has shown up.  If someone else finds him before he reveals himself, a fight-or-flight sequence is indicated, with him using a soul rip to let him escape.  If that fails, he claws, bites, and wacks his way back in to the shadows, so he can regain conscience.
Elements: His only element he has is darkness, for that he thrives in it.

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Item: NA

Background
History: Zeymah was the only hatching that survived a dragon massacre,  where humans that hated dragons united to kill all the dragons that were alive, which included Zey's parents and *Draco's entire family and friends.  When he was four years old, he was on his own, on the run away from humans.  After one year passed, he was found by the darkest knights, a group of all species that worship the night.  They took him in and taught him the art of the darkness.  These powers that the knights gave him had a legend to it, and this is the legend.  'Those who had lost all they loved in their life, shall be taught the dark arts to become a warrior of death, destruction, and darkness.'  These powers are Zey's special abilities.  "The hidden voice", is one of the powers he has gained.  "Soul rip", a power that tears a rip inside the soul, letting the pure darkness fill.  And "The reaper's will", a something that was passed down to all powerful creatures that was taken into the night, which calls the reaper of souls to take the target's soul and cut it into pieces, giving some to the summoner.
*Draco is a dragon i created on DRF.
RP Sample: I hid in the shadows, awaiting my contract.  After about an hour of waiting, he showed up.  The target was a demon that gained three elements, but i can't say what they are.  "I'll ready my reaper's will, for that they are the strongest creatures, but i can weaken it quite a bit with this."  I whispered to myself, for this is a test, and if i fail, I will be with my parents again.


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Alright, so heres how it is

Post by FrostBite on Sun Nov 29, 2015 2:10 am

zeymah do vulom wrote:
Skills and Abilities
Strengths:(What is your character good at)
Weaknesses:(What is your character's weaknesses)
Special Abilities: His special powers that range from telling his foes he is somewhere else, to weaken their bond between their souls to the mortal world, to using rage to tear out their souls, but rarely uses the last two unless he needs too.  The reason he can use these special powers is that he was trained to use them for the darkness, which they were known as "The darkest knights".  These special powers do come with a price as well for he never uses them, for that the soul riper and reaper's will weakens his own soul and will put him in a death-like slumber if used too much.  Another special ability is his shadow travel, which is a thing he created to compare him with fast-travel, but takes some energy from him for every shadow gate.

Background
History: Zeymah was the only hatching that survived a dragon massacre,  where humans that hated dragons united to kill all the dragons that were alive, which included Zey's parents and *Draco's entire family and friends.  When he was four years old, he was on his own, on the run away from humans.  After one year passed, he was found by the darkest knights, a group of all species that worship the night.  They took him in and taught him the art of the assassin.  Now, he is a assassin for hire traveling around the many worlds with his shadow-gates.

Alright, so heres how it is: You are missing three strengths and the weaknesses, get those done. Also, as for your special abilities, if its not too much trouble could you please explain each power individually? I know it may seem like a lot of work, but it helps others understand what you are capable of. Also, if you could extend your history that would be great, you also need to explain (in at least three-five sentences) how you received your darkness manipulation, as well as your other powers, because one cannot simply have a history without their powers involved. Smile

Explain how you obtained your powers in the history, extend the history more, add weaknesses and strengths, and explain your powers and abilities in Special Abilities, once you are finished, message me or post on the app and I will take a look at it.
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